Above is the drawing that I will revise.
01_Image Plant Diagram.
01. The information within the image in regards to the design intent becomes lost do hierarchy of line work, color and image size.
Method- Explore means in order to represent a hierarchy of data.
02. Line work within the drawing becomes chaotic and inconsistent.
Method- Fix line work, line weight.
03. Break down ” Urban Ecology ” represent scientific aspects, how plant is functioning. Use Guallart, Manuel Lima as references.
Method-Expand the diagram with more content of ecological functions within the design.
04. Change Botanical photos to vector icons in order to have a cohesive language.